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Tuesday, February 24, 2009
FUNERAL OF A DREAM
Mourn I today The death of a dream: Being cremated On Reality’s pyre, Engulfed with fury By cruel Fate’s fire; Stinging my eyes, Singeing my soul, And as I stand looking At the ashes grey, I feel so light- I am emptied of Life.
hi jinju you are awarded at the obnoxious mind, and i hope that you accept it. here is the link : http://obnoxiousmind.blogspot.com/2009/04/mcb-award.html
@ KP and veda: thanx 4 ur comments...do keep dropping in
@ susan: the adolescent love poem series is over...that was a valentine's day special...had mentioned it at d beginning of d series. nd well, dey r all love poems and dey were written wen i was a crazy adolescent...hence d name...as simple as that! :D
@et: Hi!!! thank u 4 d kind words and a bigger thank u 4 stopping by... do keep visiting :)
@humdinger: thanx 4 dropping in... :) i find it amusing that u found d poem amusing of all things!nd no, i wud never write such a poem on not topping my class :P abt d poem bein str84wd, well, rmmbr, dis blog is all str8 frm d heart!! Hoping to c more comments frm u... cheers!
9 comments:
good one jinju.. but i feel as if a pessimist did this post.. anyways, i liked it, and the words, :D i admire you for them.
Hmmm...yea i can be a pessimimist at times :D Thnx 4 ur feedback shravan
The death of the dream and its cremation left me sad.I admire your adept play of the words
sadness, loneliness personified.
Could you stop labelling other poems under "adolescent love poems"? It's a terrible, terrible classification.
hi jinju
you are awarded at the obnoxious mind, and i hope that you accept it. here is the link :
http://obnoxiousmind.blogspot.com/2009/04/mcb-award.html
Short and sweet poem. And the last two lines had a great feel..
And btw, my 1st comment on this blog :)
the poem,well is ok,the thought is awkward! too straightforward,but still manages to amuse one!
hmmmm,as if you wrote it on not toppin in class last term ;-)
carry on.Jinju
@ KP and veda: thanx 4 ur comments...do keep dropping in
@ susan: the adolescent love poem series is over...that was a valentine's day special...had mentioned it at d beginning of d series. nd well, dey r all love poems and dey were written wen i was a crazy adolescent...hence d name...as simple as that! :D
@et: Hi!!! thank u 4 d kind words and a bigger thank u 4 stopping by... do keep visiting :)
@humdinger: thanx 4 dropping in... :) i find it amusing that u found d poem amusing of all things!nd no, i wud never write such a poem on not topping my class :P abt d poem bein str84wd, well, rmmbr, dis blog is all str8 frm d heart!! Hoping to c more comments frm u... cheers!
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