10 lines made up of 34 words arranged in a way that makes the heart rejoice at the wonder of it all.
Well written. Has a rhythm and comparing the fire flies to stars would have sounded far fetched if it wasn't for the following three beautiful lines.
The last two lines might be a result of your obsession with night (which is quite understandable) But for me fireflies are always a beacon of defiance.
"A glittering statement against the will of darkness"
7 comments:
A scintillating poem adorning the black template of the blog!!!
So sweet :)
Have a great time, Jinju.
Ayesha
Nice poem jinju :) i remember the song fireflies from the band owlcity
btw the DuDo about me page is nw updated :)
Thank you gramps, ayesha and dudo for ur appreciation :)
10 lines made up of 34 words arranged in a way that makes the heart rejoice at the wonder of it all.
Well written. Has a rhythm and comparing the fire flies to stars would have sounded far fetched if it wasn't for the following three beautiful lines.
The last two lines might be a result of your obsession with night (which is quite understandable) But for me fireflies are always a beacon of defiance.
"A glittering statement
against the will of darkness"
Hi sourcebound! thanx 4 dropping by... and a bigger thnx 4 d keen observation...thnx a lot.... hope to c u here again.. tc :)
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